Kelyme's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[alien lego attack 2]

Work harder

Don't be so lazy about your animations, use more frames, your animation looks more like a slide show if you don't at least use 12 frames a second, or it is just that you don't have enough inbetweens, take more pictures. Once you clean up the stop motion animation I'll be much more able to make a comment since I'll be able to know what is going on in it.

[Rob "in the hood"]

Not a bad start

I didn't really get why he was going after a bird, I think you should work on your plots and such a lot more, probably add a few more frames so it runs a lot smoother. It did seemed a bit too slow paced because we weren't really getting anything out of it being so. If you work on it though you could make it into a viable series, just don't rush anything I'd say, it pays off more to work longer and have less material.

[Dojo Monkey]

Eh, it was done technically well

It was good animation, and had a good look to it. I just think the idea was stale and nothing that I haven't seen before, the only thing that is different is that if I thought of this idea I definantly wouldn't of thought it was an idea worth putting animation too. Great technical skills though, just get more creative than "Monkeys fighting, cause monkeys are funny, lol"

[omg kiwi again]

haha

I agree that it was a good thing it was short, I'd say though that you need to slow this down, that is a big problem with a lot of beginning animators, timing. I'm not saying by much, just a few frames here and there would of made it a lot better. And take time on the animation too.