Don't be so lazy about your animations, use more frames, your animation looks more like a slide show if you don't at least use 12 frames a second, or it is just that you don't have enough inbetweens, take more pictures. Once you clean up the stop motion animation I'll be much more able to make a comment since I'll be able to know what is going on in it.
Not a bad start
I didn't really get why he was going after a bird, I think you should work on your plots and such a lot more, probably add a few more frames so it runs a lot smoother. It did seemed a bit too slow paced because we weren't really getting anything out of it being so. If you work on it though you could make it into a viable series, just don't rush anything I'd say, it pays off more to work longer and have less material.
Eh, it was done technically well
It was good animation, and had a good look to it. I just think the idea was stale and nothing that I haven't seen before, the only thing that is different is that if I thought of this idea I definantly wouldn't of thought it was an idea worth putting animation too. Great technical skills though, just get more creative than "Monkeys fighting, cause monkeys are funny, lol"
I agree that it was a good thing it was short, I'd say though that you need to slow this down, that is a big problem with a lot of beginning animators, timing. I'm not saying by much, just a few frames here and there would of made it a lot better. And take time on the animation too.
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